So I started writing again.  I was enjoying it, having a ball, and all that.  Then five days later, I stopped.  That night, I decided to trash the whole thing and start fresh the next week.

Yesterday was the first day of that week.  And that was out of sheer laziness.  I’ll start tonight.  Or tomorrow at the latest on a whole different project.

But there’s still that question.  If I was enjoying what I was writing and how it was coming together (if only 3,000 words in), then why did I give it up?

Style.

Much like my wife, I can see your eyes glaze over.  Writing doesn’t have style, you argue.  Writing is just putting one word in front of the other.  There is no style to it.  Oh, but Dear Reader, there is.  It all boils down to communication.

Now for the laymen in the room, the style of writing comes from how we communicate our views on the world.  That is a very unique thing, as not a single one of us see the world through the exact same lens.  Because of that, the way that we construct sentences and paragraphs and stories changes.  The verbs are in different places.  The world is described just a little different.  The emphasized word is not the same one you or I would choose.

These are the small things, the little quirks that individualizes each writer.  And we imitate those styles as we develop and grow.  It’s natural for us to appreciate some story or novel and then try to write something along the same lines, in that author’s style.  As we take down line after line, we imagine to ourselves how would Tolkien or Asimov or whomever have written this?  And any author who says they didn’t is a liar.

Still not sure what I mean?  Think about it this way.  Imagine the epic that is The Lord of the Rings in all its glory.  Now consider how it would have sounded had Stephen King written it rather than J.R.R. Tolkien.  Or what about James Patterson?  Ernest Hemingway with his short and to the point style?  Not the same book is it?

Hence style.

Now, what I was writing the other day was me experimenting with style.  What I was trying to write was a comedy while taking into consideration all those things that I mentioned I was learning last week.  If you weren’t aware, I have a dry sense of humor.  Dry as in mix it with gin and a bit of olive juice and you’d have a dirty martini dry.  So I faced a decent challenge in bringing that across to the reader.

The resultant mix was about on par for what I was going for—granted, based on my own opinions.  Maybe it could have been a bit funnier, maybe a bit more absurdity, but overall I was happy.  So why did I ditch the draft?

First off, I wouldn’t say ditched so much as put on a shelf for another day.  I do plan on revisiting this idea someday, but today isn’t that day.  There are too many ideas for me not to.  Besides, this story would be a labor of love while poking fun at a genre and franchise that I’ve loved all my life.  And boy, do I know how to go over the top with this one.

But the second reason was style.  I was writing it in a way that was so different from my own that I was consistently re-evaluating the writing process.  That’s no way to write a book.  Also, the style that I formatted the book in (i.e. how the chapters are designed and written) was something that I was unsure if I could keep up for the period of time necessary to complete the novel.

I did learn a few things however, like how I would have to structure the novel.  The importance of point of view for it.  How to create something absurd and, more importantly, how to make it work over the long term.  Other things.  Really, it would have been great had the novel taken off on its own, but did I expect it to?  No.

So in putting it down, I closed that story for now.  I will be back later, but now, it is time for me to focus on something that I know I can write.  Something a bit more serious.  More on that some other time.


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2 thoughts on “Style. It Ain’t Easy.

  1. I do agree that in some stories I have copied the style of favorite Authors. My “Barbarian Tales” WIP is clearly an attempt at recreating the style of the late, great Robert E. Howard’s Conan series. I read a bunch of those books in my late teens, and they had a fantastic impact on me.
    I have so many story ideas I’ve left behind. Most, I probably won’t get back to, some I have already deleted. It’s tough trying to get the right style for a particular story, as a lot of mine are not the same. I try to be a multi-genre writer, and steer clear of writing the same thing different ways, if you know what I mean.
    Some of my short stories I have thought about expanding, trying for a longer piece. So far, thinking about it is as far as I’ve gotten.

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    1. Oh, I understand perfectly. When writing anything, we have to make sure that either our style fits the story or the story fits our style.
      I mean, what I stopped working on for my current project was a distinctive style that was a reach away from the norm. And I was ok with that, since it was more of an experiment than anything else. When I go back to it (I’ve promised K that I would), I don’t know if I’ll keep that style or try to conform the novel towards my own. Maybe switch up a pov. Don’t know.
      But sometimes, that’s the best thing about style. We can play with it and mold it into something we like. Just be wary of those who claim to be a mix of J.R.R. Tolkien, Machiavelli, and James Patterson.
      I don’t even know how that would work…. 😀

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